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Summer is here,
Take your time and wipe those tears.
Climb inside lets go for a ride,
Nice blue lakes and pretty landscapes.
It doesn't seem real, you're touching my face
memories replaced, razor blades and chemical waste.

Lets keep going no time to stop.
Summer is dying, confusion and electric shock.
Fall is crying, your body is set on automatic.
You just had to have it, seasonal blasphemy.
Leaves keep changing, take a deep breath and ask me;
Is winter here? The trees on Cherry Lane are bare.
They hold skeleton frames, I'm trying so hard to forget your name.
I'll never forget the day you came, red lipstick and pain.

She's my passenger on this trip,
winter starts to melt and this is the best I have ever felt.
Spring is here, angels faces are near.
They represent a new bloody rage, fear is fashion.
Wear it with passion, all of our best hero's have died.
All of our best tears have been cried.

Climb inside lets go for a ride,
she's my passenger on this trip.
You just had to have it, seasonal blasphemy.
Don't take this, don't take this away from me.
Angels faces are near, invisible but emotionally clear.
This silent killer is spreading, I feel the disease I'm sweating.

Climb inside you're my passenger.
Such a beautiful face no season could replace.
Don't take this away from me your love is what I need.
©2006-2010 ~fourdaysfromnow
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Just something I wrote yesterday while laying down in my bed listening to my MP3 player.

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ryan, this ones amazing.

i cant choose a specific part that i love best. the entire thing is perfect.

- much love,

Alaynaxo.
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This is freaking awesome sweetie. I can actually get a visual of this.

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Thank you :D

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Love it, everything about it is just amazing. Great job man, just awesome.
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thanks a lot :)

I appreciate it.

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:iconbaarish:
i honestly have not read rhymed poetry so well done and filled with so much passion and emotion. this is truly exquisit and chilling. i don't know if it was the song i was listening at the time of reading or your sense of beautiful and simple words...or both! but, i have to favourite this..
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Thank you! :)
Such enthusiasm in a compliment is hard to come by these days on deviantART, thanks very much and thank you especially for taking the time to read it. I appreciate it.

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I've disappeared a long while- I return and just had to read some of your poetry. You inspire me so. =]
They hold skeleton frames, I'm trying so hard to forget your name.
I'll never forget the day you came, red lipstick and pain.

You never fail to take my breath away with your words.
This is beautiful and I will be going through all the things I have missed. You are raw talent my dear.
Don't give it up. =]
Kaveeta xx

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